Thou Are Rich Poem by Binod Bastola

Thou Are Rich

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From the far distance;
To the nearest reach,
Where and how to the doubts of dangle, circling in life.
Thou goest with point of end and start;
Thou left everything there,
And start a new end of point of start;
Reawakening or reincarnating self.
Finding and filling with uplift in life,
No matter what was thy yesterday;
Make better today with new start in thy thoughts and actions...

From the far distance
Or to the nearest reach,
Thou are the richer of it.

Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 October 2015

No matter what was thy yesterday; Make better today with new start in thy thoughts and actions... Verily, the very present moment should be put into righteous action........10

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Kim Barney 25 August 2015

THEE is a direct object. THOU is a subject. Your title should be THOU ART RICH. Line four: THOU GOEST... Last line: THOU ART the richer FOR it. Thou knowest that I tell thee these things for thy own good, right? I know it's hard writing poetry in a foreign language. Most native English speakers can't use THEE and THOU correctly, either, so don't feel bad. In fact, most don't even TRY to use them. We just stick with using YOU. YOU can be either a subject or an object, so it's much easier.

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Binod Bastola 25 August 2015

Thank you thee! i don't feel bad at all...i writes and only writes....editors are what they corrects my grammar i am not not a master of language but i can write, think, imagine so on and so forth. When i write i love to forget rules! ... thank you for enlightening me....

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