This Ring Poem by Official 1SP

Official 1SP

Official 1SP

Boca Raton, Florida, United States of America

This Ring

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I found comfort with this ring,
Peace as I hear my soul sings;
An eternity of song for you and I,
Every time I feel you nearby.

Nothing compares to how much,
I get electrified by a single touch;
Even when you are not around,
You are in this ring to I am bound.

This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year's past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.

… with this ring.

There is pleasure when we trust,
Being together in prayer saved us;
So overblessed for you to be mine,
A rib only God set out for me to find.

The favor of God covers us both,
Through journeys of marital growth;
We are rejoice today without cursory,
Because God gave us an anniversary.


This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year's past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.

… with this ring.

Happy Anniversary.

This Ring
Wednesday, January 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: anniversary,love,loyalty,marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 December 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings in verse with rhythmic splendour. Very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Padmanabhan Ananth 29 January 2014

Excellent poem, Lamar. Was somehow reminded of an old country number by Lobo titled Rings. Great write -Paddy.

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One Said Purpose 17 June 2020

Thank you.

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Official 1SP

Official 1SP

Boca Raton, Florida, United States of America
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