This Newly Loving Game Poem by David Keig

This Newly Loving Game

Rating: 4.2


I had some time this morning that clarified my mind
The thoughts that drifted past me were of a quiet and gentle kind
I'm not saying I'm in love with you, I'm just saying that I find
That thoughts keep drifting past me of a quiet and gentle kind.

The feelings that I'm having are not easy to explain
It’s been some time since I've been in this newly loving game
It's all slow moving on now and I really can't explain
The rules that we should follow in this newly loving game.

I took the time this afternoon to write my thinking down
And all the time I wondered why and let my mind go round
Around and around the time we've spent and what I feel I've found
It took some time, I wondered why and said my thoughts aloud.

Then I ripped up the paper and I threw it on the floor
The words that I had written were like trying to keep a score
I'd tried to use my reasonings as I had done before
And the marks upon that paper had no meaning anymore.

The way that all this seems to me is not easy to explain
It’s been some time since I've been in this newly loving game
It's all slow moving on now and I really can't explain
The rules that we should follow in this newly loving game.

I spent some time this evening thinkin' of just who I am
What I like about me and what is it that I can
Offer up to someone who, when all this thing began,
Was not needing of lover nor even of a man.

Yes, we do have common interests and we can talk for hours
We share a love of poets and a questioning of power
We hold each other closely even though we're wondering how
This thing that we are making could be completely ours.

The feelings that I have for you are not easy to explain
It’s been some time since I've been in this newly loving game
It's all slow moving on now and I really can't explain
The rules that we should follow in this newly loving game.

There is a lack of time for us and some hurt within our hearts
And that got me on to thinking that our paths are really hard.
The time I took to think today was 'bout us being apart
And the way we are beginning yet not knowing how to start.

The feelings that I have now are not easy to explain
It’s been some time since I've been in this newly loving game
It's all slow moving on now and I really can't explain
The rules that we should follow in this newly loving game.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natalie Malveiro 08 August 2008

Interesting Mr. Keig...is this from personal experience or imagination? ? ? Either way it is a very moving poem......Good luck....keep on keeping on......N.

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Susan Alldred-lugton 12 July 2005

I have come back to this poem again and am impressed by the subtlties expressed in it The subtle nuances surrounding the dilemma of allowing oneself to love and more importnatly to be loved, to premit oneself to be that vulnerable The challenges involved in crossing from the fantasy of being in love to the reality of a more mature love can indeed be formidable tne only tells whter it is worth it Thankyou

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Susan Alldred-lugton 15 March 2005

A beautifully crafted poem about something new I wonder who it is about

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