This Lovely Haiku Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

This Lovely Haiku



This lovely haiku
Is keen to say I love you
And my love is true

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Adeline Foster 13 November 2012

As a Haiku, the syllables or breaths in this is correct making it pleasant to read. Did you know that there are other rules of haiku that makes it both challenging and enjoyable. One is that a season should be implied somehow and another is that the first person is non-allowed. Yet, as you used I love you as a direct object, it can be allowed. Adeline

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Bolah Lawal 01 November 2012

Nice, well done..........

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Ramesh Rai 30 October 2012

Good, exlent. you have good writing capacity.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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