This Life. Poem by Adeline A Roberts

This Life.



This life could be right
This life is not right
We've lived in they're right
We've never felt right
Someone's always calling
Someone's creeping in
He makes life right
He makes me live
I've never felt better
I've never felt secure
With this perspective
With this I'm sure
Life can be made right
Life can be real
No empty heart
No empty life
I just can't describe it
I just have to share
We all deserve it
We all must feel
This life is not right
This life could be right

Wednesday, December 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This life on earth is just messed up. This life on earth is not right. There is a better life, though hard to live it; it is far better a life than this earthly life. We could be in the world but not of the world. This life could be made right only if we take a step into the right. Step in the Love and the Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harith Turki 15 March 2016

It's a very interesting piece of work. You could state your ideas in a very simple, yet grand way!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 08 January 2015

This life is not right This life could be right Nicely done poem.I enjoyed reading it.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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