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this is the life

In life sometimes you're up
sometimes you're down
sometimes you win
sometimes you loose you crown
sometimes you survive
sometimes you drawn
In life sometimes you feel law
sometimes you feel high
sometimes you smile
sometimes you cry
in life sometimes your dreams come true
sometimes your dreams flew
sometimes it breakes all the hope and the thoughts you drew
sometimes it makes a strong relation that last forever between two
sometimes it takes friends and people we love and we knew
sometimes we forgot the pain
sometimes the pain grew
but this is the life
and we should go throw

Submitted: Friday, July 10, 2009
Edited: Friday, September 10, 2010


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  • Afzal Shauq (4/19/2010 6:24:00 AM)

    sweet and quite meaningful...really a good poem

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  • &&angel4ever && (8/4/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    nice words and idea...........light theme

  • sky dreams (7/28/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    very meaningful poem, speaks nothing but truth.. good write =)

  • Henry Brown (7/18/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    This is life...some poems are good some poems are bad Yours are good

  • Ency Bearis (7/13/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    a great write of the evolution of life....well presented, , , great job...

  • Anjali Sinha (7/13/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    very beautiful
    nicely penned
    anjali

  • Pamela Chalecka (7/11/2009 4:46:00 PM)

    so true! keep up the good work

  • Steven Pimentel (7/11/2009 11:45:00 AM)

    great.. keep doing your thing your qood

  • Shalini Sundararamalingam (7/11/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    nice poem listing all the ups and downs in life...

    In life sometimes you feel law
    sometimes you feel high

    i think it should be ' low ' instead of law....

  • Luwi Habte (7/10/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    life is every thing and seldom nothing
    you better explain it well lola
    nice poem
    you too visit my poetry
    luwi

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