This Is The Life Poem by lola hi l

This Is The Life

Rating: 5.0


In life sometimes you're up
sometimes you're down
sometimes you win
sometimes you loose you crown
sometimes you survive
sometimes you drawn
In life sometimes you feel law
sometimes you feel high
sometimes you smile
sometimes you cry
in life sometimes your dreams come true
sometimes your dreams flew
sometimes it breakes all the hope and the thoughts you drew
sometimes it makes a strong relation that last forever between two
sometimes it takes friends and people we love and we knew
sometimes we forgot the pain
sometimes the pain grew
but this is the life
and we should go throw

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bele Lele 11 July 2009

so true! keep up the good work

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Anjali Sinha 13 July 2009

very beautiful nicely penned anjali

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Becky Kellington 10 July 2009

I like the way you listed everything in life. It made me think alot about life. Great Job!

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Luwi Habte 10 July 2009

life is every thing and seldom nothing you better explain it well lola nice poem you too visit my poetry luwi

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nice poem listing all the ups and downs in life... In life sometimes you feel law sometimes you feel high i think it should be ' low ' instead of law....

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Afzal Shauq 19 April 2010

sweet and quite meaningful...really a good poem

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&&angel4ever && 04 August 2009

nice words and idea...........light theme

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

very meaningful poem, speaks nothing but truth.. good write =)

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Henry Brown 18 July 2009

This is life...some poems are good some poems are bad Yours are good

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Ency Bearis 13 July 2009

a great write of the evolution of life....well presented, , , great job...

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