This Is My House Poem by V P Mahur

This Is My House

Rating: 5.0


That is my house
So sweet so lovely
Very old but every day
Looks new jolly
After long tiring work
Its gives me a sensation of
Cool lovely garden
Among my loving children
And smiling intimately hugging
My sweet wife
A mate of my every life

This is my house
So caring and so possessive
To attract me from anywhere
Into its safe care
A place where
I sit into deep meditation
With the Lord of my creation
Blessing me with His glare
Of heavenly cheer

This is my house
Which I erected
Brick by brick
Layer by layer
And watched it taking shape
Year by year
Like my own children
Who perhaps will never know
Through how much pains
We two had to go
To give them a shelter
Full of safety and love
Yet we feel a satisfaction
That its every dimension
Tells a silent story
Of our true dedication

This is my house
Which will tell our story
Of love and affection
To our coming generation
When we would be no more
But our souls will anchor
Here to watch our children
Living happily
As a family
Looking satisfactorily
At our portraits

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on April 13,2014.

Note: This poem has been selected
by the Lost Tower Publication
To be published in their book 'Eastern Voices'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 19 April 2014

This poem is a salt of the earth poem my friend! A fortress the home is to those whom invest love and care, I can relate to this poem in so many ways, I come from a poor upbringing and I raised my children with love and also, I am a brick mason and I did erect my house brick by brick..layer by layer, Just an outstanding poem! !

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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