This Girl Poem by Julie Bond

This Girl

Rating: 4.5


This Girl In The Dark
Has a beautiful face without a name
And a beautiful smile to hide the pain
This Girl In the Dark
Has cuts up her arm
Loves nothing more then self harm
This Girl in the dark
Doesn't know how much longer she can keep trying
Everyday she's slowly dying
This Girl in the Dark
Sits all alone
Wants a place to truly call home
This Girl in the dark
Wants nothing more then to be free
I know this because this Girl is me

This Girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellz Bellz 13 December 2005

wow. you are truelly talented.

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***** ********* 21 December 2005

This poem has good rhythm Julie, and a great deal of honesty too. 10 from Tai wishing you a merry christmas

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Imani/Jayden 27 August 2020

This is a poem that relates very much to me

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Lia Stroud 22 February 2010

That's a really good poem, it reminds me of myself

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Sarah Chapman 14 November 2006

This is so sad but really good as well. and if you keep lookin inside then you find your path and you light

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Iva Wells 15 August 2006

i agree with Cecil Hickman and Tai Chi Italy of what they said about your poem its a good poem but sad to and to tell you one thing keep it up because this one was really good

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Cecil Hickman 11 February 2006

even though this was sad it is written very very well I can see in your words the pain that you feel.

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