This Doesn'T Seem Right Poem by Fierce Mcknight

This Doesn'T Seem Right

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Something doesn't seem right
the air is blowing hard
and these amazing lights of thunder
are scaring me tonight
I think someones in my kitchen
or maybe in my bathroom
just remind me
this house never did rule
I'm walking and I'm scared
no light to see
I'm scared because I'm lonley
now would that put a fright to your night
you say oh please and then you screamed in fright
We warned you before the the clock got to 12
but you never did listen
that's what made you cruel
We tried to leave you but we loved you dearly but still
I remember the screams you screamed fearly
I laughed when I saw your face
because you never did have any grace
We loved you with all are might
but we just needed a moment of fright
You ran away in fear
until you saw a deer
you headed the other way
but all you got was another day
your time reversed now your in another day of fright
and I told you clearly
This doesen't seem right

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm a young poet with no life so right on here.Life sometimes let you down but dint be afraid.Even tho you are scared still stand up for you rights
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Fierce. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Fierce Mcknight 17 December 2013

This poem is amgnifSENT

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