This Day Poem by Abigail Torres

This Day



without you my day darkened
without you its not the same
I want you here with me
without you I lose meaning
without you Im battling
I need you here to save me
without you I fall oh so low
without you I lose feeling
You keep me breathing
without you I'm heartless
without you I'm so hopeless
I smile when I'm around you
without you I fake a smile
without you I overthink
Im complete when with you
without you I'm drowning
I wanna know if you down
are you gonna be here at my lowest
and give me your fullest

Friday, June 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

Although I like the way you can almost feel the ache and wanting conveyed through this poem, I also feel that a person needs to be comfortable and at ease with just being with themselves. It makes being with that special one even more wonderful! Nicely expressed poem!

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Gajanan Mishra 07 June 2014

love, love, pure love, good writing, thanks.

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