This Connectivity! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Neha Aradhye

This Connectivity! ! ! ! ! !

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we met....became friends,
a new image formed.....
we had forms of talks,
seemed, with mine, it conformed...


this connectivity between me & u,
Marvelous and amazing too.
The meter of our love,
Is goin' high, up above.


i figured out something,
the chemistry that flows,
between us is so natural,
and now we’re so close! ! ! !


(below penned, guided by Dhanesh)

we share, we care...
we talk, we walk,
May not always be together,
for we know we come from different chambers,
the lone walk is toward each other...
You know when to pull or let me go,
because,
sometimes i wanna b alone...

u understand my feelings & me,
somehow u know whenever i'm searching for u...
u know the other times, i need u.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 06 May 2009

good write.......can do with a stanza or two more...nice effort :)

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Deependra Kumar Jha 28 June 2009

I am glad that you have found someone! nice flow of expressions, romantic indeed.

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~ Jon London ~ 11 May 2009

This poem proves that there's someone out there for everyone, if you never lose love in your hearts......im happy for you....wishing you the very best jon

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Chitra - 07 May 2009

I am glad you have found the most compatible connectivity sweet poem

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Dhanesh Aradhye 06 May 2009

wel.. its sweet n short.. bt finished too early for me... anyways, nice one yaar... keep writing...

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Vinod Ak 06 May 2009

sweet expression! best wishes for an enduring connectivity!

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