Thirst Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Thirst

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Shall I thirst your love now
That cascading love,
From a mountain of your heart.
Fills this pond's soul
Where I can see my flushed face,
On the crystal surface of your love
Shall I drink that elixir of love
For this heart is thirsty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niamat Ali Murtazai 23 October 2011

It is a beautiful poem with wonderful metaphors. Beloved's heart is the mountain that flow down to land. Lover's heart is the pond where that water flows into. This water or the meeting of the beloved is elixir for the lover. May the lover get the cherished elixir!

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Jacqui Broad 23 October 2011

Great! I always thought one are hungry for love, but I like your description better... Your poetry amazes me...

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

Aww...This one very reflective from heart to soul by the beam of feelings...Again you nailed the poem very well...Wonder how can you emerge new idea suddenly, all your tears just gone, dried and changed your new style of poetry with cheer and happiness...i can feel joy really this much.. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Poet Of The River 23 October 2011

To wish for love, to indulge yourself in it. truly a interesting outlook.

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Dead Leaf 24 October 2011

love is the only thing, which tend us to live.............with the most beautiful words you did it well

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Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

Exceptional and exquisite lovely poem of yours! In one phrase it simply captured my heart! Kudos!

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Sara Fielder 25 January 2012

I am not worthy to be reading this poem of perfection........

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Vijay Gupta 26 October 2011

Good narration about the pious love......

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Harindhar Reddy 26 October 2011

Dear Vipins, Again and again your producing love magic what is the secret enigma behind your love logical poems. This poem proved history repeats itself again and again as your love poems one by one are competing on each other to emerge as winners. But I say, most of your love poems belong to heaven's lane...... I enjoyed these lines of the poem..... 'Where I can see my flushed face, On the crystal surface of your love Shall I drink that elixir of love' Great vippins you have gleat hand in writing love poetry. Thanks for sharing poems like these............Cheerio for now........ Hope to catch your poems soon again..... For this heart is thirsty.'

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Stefanie Fontker 25 October 2011

I'm really enjoying your latest posts! Beautiful work, strong and emotional. I love this.

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