Thinking It Will Really Work! ! Poem by Dipika Pathania

Thinking It Will Really Work! !

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Thinking too much of it
Trying very hard for it

Still I am left with where i started
Seems like all I had with me has departed...

The journey has been worth remembering
And some memories worth treasuring

Still when things go wrong sometime
All I do is try fighting against time....

Probably it happens when you consider fighting worth
Or may be when you think that..it will really work! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayaprakash Panicker 08 July 2008

beautiful couplets that make people hopeful, it will work, sometimes it may not. most of time it works, if we do our due. memorable lines. it will really work. it will. write and write and write. it is working.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2008

well, it has started to work! probably your time arrived! i like this poem...the way the thought it contains is presented...! *10*

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Abha Sharma 21 April 2008

fighting and trying is our duty, the result is in God's hand...and he knows what is good for us...a thought provoking theme...think and try executing...leave the rest on the almighty..[Bhagwat Gita preaches this]

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