Thinking Poem by ramesh rai

Thinking

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Thinking!
Is part and parcel
of my life and to give them words
sometime i miss
then i repent
thought comes in mind
like a blow of wind
if not captured in cassette of words
they are not to come back.

Monday, October 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Thinking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 31 October 2014

Brilliant poem! Yes, the thinking captured in cassetes of words! Not easy to do it properly, if not impossible, for me feels like wanting to squeeze the infinite in a tiny box. I have to simplify just like you do, and all the rest I would let free to float around in the unspoken words between the lines.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2014

A thought must be recorded right away. The thought is also accompanied by right words. If not recorded, sometimes the thought is vaguely remembered but the words are totally forgotten. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful lines......I loved reading it. thought comes in mind like a blow of wind if not captured in cassette of words they are not to come back. Very true said, thoughts comes like a flash and it vanishes away in seconds too. If we dont write, we may not recollect even sometimes.....

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 October 2014

A well composed about thinking..the disease of oblivion that we all suffer and grope 'what I was thinking poet has put it in very effectively- they are not to come back. lovely

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Salini Nair 21 October 2014

words are like blow of wind......nice sir

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