Things Of Dreams Poem by Smoky Hoss

Things Of Dreams

Rating: 5.0


visions of flames
showing people without names
faces in the night
quietly asking for light
small fires afar, aglow
across wide valleys, way below
sitting on mountain tops alone
looking to the sky, searching for home
whispering waters trying to speak
dark curtains refusing to give a peak
the funeral march of Chopin
singing: we will never pass this way again
breathing in entire clouds
learning to love, as never before allowed
joyous for no particular occasion
embracing a pure, peaceful sensation
laughing without restraint
in finding, all are part sinner, part saint...
some dark, some light,
these strange visitors of the deep night.

Tuesday, June 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

Dreams are often strange and curious, and wish fulfillments as Freud would say. A lovely read Smoky.

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Joseph Anderson 06 July 2014

Indeed a strange dream, but a vivid allegorical description of what dreams are made of. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.I am reminded of Dante's Inferno. In depth this is about the best i have seen

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Patti Masterman 05 July 2014

I like the style of rhyming a lot.

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Dave Walker 26 June 2014

A great poem, our dreams are what some call our other life. we definitely see some strange things in our dreams.

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