They Took Him Away Poem by Tea Kawana

They Took Him Away



a day in which, coming seconds
are filled to the brim of pain,
ambivalent thoughts,
non-stopping thoughts.

a calm assurance too hard to find,
and searching hurts,
at every step,
because there’s none to find,

but of which I lost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 31 July 2008

you have a gift for brevity which evokes thoughts in the readers mind.you demonstrate a wide vocabulary with your use of well chosen words, May I correct you on one point The word Peek meaning a quick look is spelt with two Es Peak has an entirley dfferenet set of meanings ivor aka poeticpiers

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