These Fears Washed Clean Poem by Daniel Warner

These Fears Washed Clean

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These fears washed clean
the dreams sought of tomorrow,
but who is to deem
for these dreams have melted to sorrow.
I sought the help of you,
but, in turn, gained nothing
now what shall I do
with fear lingering above me.
I beckoned knowledgeable gain
still I was only granted
this in-expellable pain,
but these fears seem enchanted
and stay with me today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josephine Collett 20 May 2012

This is beautiful and sad and a little mysterious Daniel. I can't believe you are only 16 - your writing has a depth and maturity. I hope writing helps you to come to terms with your life and turn it around. You definitely have a creative gift and I look forward to seeing your work develop.

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