There.. Poem by SALINI NAIR

There..

Rating: 4.0


Those tides are in haste
But set in a safe place
Can't sink or reign

Those tides are in haste
There may sink my prejudice
Vigor may lift its surges

Those tides are in haste
Wipe there with a buzz
End up as froth

Those tides are in haste
A part of the shore
Desire surge to depths

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Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 24 November 2014

Tides and tidal waves always happening in sea particularly near the shore and often damages and ruins the land itself. But it have a wonderful scenic beauty reminding us the plight of nature and life itself where tides are coming and going and ultimately perishing in oblivion a real event in the nature. good poetry.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2014

Those tides are in haste A part of the shore Desire surge to depths Tides come and go but the shore remains at its place.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 November 2014

This is a wonderful piece penned very intelligently comparing desires of life with tides of sea.....well-deserved 10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

A poem that compares the tide of the sea with the desire of life - Whole poem stood here with its superb symbolism First line of each stanza more or less anapest in nature that gives a haste or movement- Thank you Salini very nice p[poem you composed=- worth to read - 10

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 November 2014

There may sink my prejudice Vigor may lift its surges....................................................i have seen such an incomparable description of the sea...........i am greatly fascinated.................there is a lot to learn from your poem.......................great...........thanks

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