There Poem by Susan Lacovara

There



I thought I saw your face again

There

There in a fleeting glimpse

of yesterday

I thought you winked at me

I thought I heard you call my name

There

There from your side steps

Inviting me in for tea or vodka

I swore I felt you breeze on by

Humming out loud, some seventies song

There

There as I turned too slow

Was it really you

There

Friday, August 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: missing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
08/23/14) smoothly slips away....there
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 30 August 2014

This is a haunting poem because the speaker is a haunted woman. And I found myself identifying totally with her experiences which are both real and imagined. You handled the repetition of the word THERE very effectively, and it binds the various details of the poem, like a thread that connects things. This strikes me as a Poem Of Desire. Desire is a vexed word. It can liberate us when desire is shared, or it can drive nutty if it's just a free-floating emotion with no object. Desire in this poem seems to be leading to fulfillment of some kind!

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Anthony Burkett 29 August 2014

I love the soft glimmer of a dream... or perhaps it's just the vodka!

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