Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 5,767 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Then Comes The Night - Poem by Patricia Grantham

When the the sun goes down and the day is done
Some battles are lost and others have been won
The toils of the day has gotten the best of you
Ready for another chance to start your life anew

Night is getting closer you can hardly see the light
Troubles were many so you gave it all your might
Hoping to make it through the long and lonely night
Things look dark and dreary but soon will be all right

The stars light up the night and twinkled in the skies
Sleep crept up slowly with lots of blinking of the eyes
You tossed and turned all night then got up out of bed
Filled with the worries of just what might lie up ahead

You went and got back into bed and finally went to sleep
Then slept until daylight and opened the shutters to peep
Overcome with great joy that you made it through the night
A good nights sleep is a blessing and more than just a fight

Comments about Then Comes The Night by Patricia Grantham

  • Gold Star - 11,752 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/5/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    A good nights sleep is a blessing. Sleep is important for life, so is the night. Nicely developed. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 45,961 Points Valsa George (7/18/2013 11:55:00 AM)

    After a weary day comes the night, blessing us with rest and sleep, that we get out of our bed fresh and energetic to take up the challenges of everyday! Sleep is the balm for tired minds! A sleepless night is enervating, but a night of sound sleep is invigorating! Enjoyed this great write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Louis Rams (6/8/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    then came the night and a cool night breeze as it put my mind and soul completely at ease (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Louis Rams (6/8/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    then came the night and my mind was put at ease, as I felt the cool night breeze
    it was a tingling sensation that entered my mind and soul, leaving me relaxed and completely whole. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,537 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/28/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    I understand this very well. If you have time try Sleep My Love.Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,674 Points Kavya . (5/23/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    v nice poem..yes sleep is essential n plays a vital role to rejuvenate yourself to spring into action the next day! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (5/22/2013 1:16:00 AM)

    Our bodies heal when we are asleep; physically, mentally, and spiritually. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,648 Points Paul Brookes (5/16/2013 2:40:00 AM)

    I know its value suffering from insomnia. Great poem Thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (5/9/2013 4:03:00 PM)

    A good night's sleep makes all the difference to how we feel. A well written poem Patricia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 214 Points Buxton Shippy (5/9/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    A thoughtful poem about contemporary life that gives one hope. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,245 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/9/2013 8:47:00 AM)

    Night comes, not
    Quickly or slowly
    But the pace within our mind
    Blows quickly as sun goes west (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 22, 2013

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