Thee, My Master Piece Poem by Rinchen Dhendup

Thee, My Master Piece

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You're the the most beautiful poem I have written,
Personifying my Verses even without dictions,
Giving my lines the Rhythms even without the Rhymes,
And giving my poem the blissful mood that remains constant.

You're the most soothing lyric I have written,
Written with the feels on the walls of my heart.
The Lyric that always opens my heart to sing,
And touches me even without the tune.

You're the Master Piece I ever dreamt to write,
The Piece I was looking in the poetry every where,
And I have been to the woods and in the hearts of nature,
Now I finally have written my Master piece untill you.

Wednesday, May 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poetic dedication to the girl when met made me feel extremely too pleasent.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words from the heart. The essence of Poetic Masterpiece - A childbirth of profundity from deep recesses of the unconscious mind is aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Rinchen. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Rinchen Dhendup 03 March 2017

Thank you sincerely. Means a lot to me.

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Rinchen Dhendup 03 March 2017

Means a lot to me. Thank you sincerely.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2016

Personifying my Verses even without dictions, Giving my lines the Rhythms even without the Rhymes, And giving my poem the blissful mood that remains constant. i hve been in the woods and in the heart of nature to write you my beloved poem..... very nice imagination my dear poet....... thank you. may the girl whom you met be blessed. tony

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Rinchen Dhendup 04 May 2016

Thank you for the comments and would love to read your poem too but could not trace your link.

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Rinchen Dhendup 04 May 2016

Thank you. Acyually I would love to read your poem but I could not trace the link.

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