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The Yellow Balloon

My mind is a seascape of caressing, white, foamy waves,
With a sandy beach with lifeguards prepared to save.
You're tall, muscular with blue, mirror eyes,
Reflecting our love as breathtaking,
As this perfect connection of sea and sky,
Seabreezes can't cool our robust desires,
Like the dancing of flames in an open fire.

Happiness is walking hand in hand around Courtown Harbour,
The beating, relentless sun on our hot, moist skin, well protected,
Our love so deep, it is easily detected,
With emotions wrapped and neatly tied.
Suddenly a yellow balloon escapes from a small childs fingers,
Like a large bubble flying so gracefully, as it doesn't linger.

In the bluest skies above the light drenched sea,
Like it all has been fully painted with an artistic, steady hand,
Nearby a radio plays loudly, the sound of a heavy rock band,
Creeping everywhere is particles of fine, gritty sand.
This view of a tantalizing seascape,
Our hearts runs free as we at last pull back the drapes,
Like the yellow balloon bobbing with smiles,
At the many miles.

With our bodies and souls immersed,
In this factual verse.
Yellow balloon where will you fly to?
Will you settle with comfort and memories of past adventures,
With a life to enjoy, not just too endure,
As night falls,
The yellow balloon, still dancing with the gleam of the charismatic moon,
The small child no longer cries or calls!

Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 18, 2013


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  • Lyn Paul (9/5/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    A superb write Hazel I like the softness in these words

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  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (7/29/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    Wow! again a superb poem. enjoyable read.
    Siya_! !

  • Dave Walker (7/27/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    A beautiful and romantic poem. Really great.

  • Vizard Dhawan (7/26/2013 1:39:00 AM)

    your poems give peace to my soul and rest to my mind
    a always loving poem

  • Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 2:21:00 PM)

    a yellow balloon can easily be seen. a good write nice imagery

  • Valerie Dohren (7/23/2013 2:07:00 PM)

    Very imaginative write, tells a lovely romantic story. Well done Hazel.

  • Indranil Bhaduri (7/20/2013 6:26:00 AM)

    Mindblowing maam...A gem of a composition.

  • Dinesh Nair (7/19/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    In short your mind is great Hazel. The poem is a beautiful account of things rarely spoken of otherwise. Your perception of true poetry often amazes me and I begin to learn new things.

  • Soulful Heart (7/19/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    soar higher....charming poem

  • Unwritten Soul (7/18/2013 9:34:00 PM)

    Hazel, this is really beautiful, the flows moving so smooth like a silk, and good enough as a melodic poetry..very cool write! ! keep writing great_SOul

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