The World Is Suffering Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The World Is Suffering

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If I say I am seer
People will not hear
Offer no cheers
Shed no tears

If I say I am saint or sage
They will write about full page
Appreciate and adore
Work for people’s welfare

If I claim to be God
Entire population will flood
To my place of worship
To keep afloat their ship

Today we need cheaters
Not love raiser but haters
As large population has turned opportunist
They follow blindly on cartoonist

They pay little attention
Over the report of adulteration
Over the cases of rapes and exploitation
They want fast money with quick rotation

“Exploiters may always have field day”
Where greedy are awaiting to find their day
The cheaters may enjoy at their cost
The result is “World is suffering most”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

Carly Wile3 minutes ago its pretty good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

David Smith4 minutes ago Pretty good message too Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

Ty Roc4 minutes ago I like it Comment +1 Well written

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

So true April Sutton-BoggsLess than a minute ago Not real strong but strong enough that you proved your point. Nice job! ! ! Comment +1 This has truth to it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, October 06,2013 (06: 21: 00) Parts of this don't make sense. You are a good poet, dont forct the rhyme.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Saturday, October 05,2013 (13: 56: 34) I like how universal the title is.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Saturday, October 05,2013 (13: 56: 34) I like how universal the title is.

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Bharti Chandwani 04 October 2013

beautiful poem sir....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

if I say I am seer People will not hear Offer no cheers Shed no tears

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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