The World He Made Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

The World He Made

Rating: 5.0


He asked but never judged
He knew but he smiled and hugged
He felt my pain was sad with my loss
But he held my hand and carried my cross

His love I feel in every smile
His trust I gain without denial
He pushes me to standup tall
Forget the past the hurt and all

He brought me in a happy world
Where joy and smiles are hundredfold
A place of dreams and plans ahead
A sanctuary of love prepared

With him my views in life have changed
With him all things seem prearranged
He holds my hand I feel secured
I look at him my thanks untold

His promises are all fulfilled
Our goals ahead slowly build
The world he made the sky is clear
With his words of love I hold so dear

His world my world a world I dream
A dream I never thought I'll claim
A claim I'm sure I wont give up
The world he made a world of LOVE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 24 February 2011

A beautiful way of expressing the the joy of this world- great rhymn and cadence-a 10 Joe

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Santosh Sharma 02 March 2011

A beautiful feeling it gave, it is his grace.A nice write

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Umar J Wilson lll 03 March 2011

This is a great poem. It expresses a lot of emotions and i like it a lot

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

then he is your support...hold and support him too that he does not break....u r his support too by Newtonian mechanics

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Jim Troy 13 August 2011

Naida my friend, .... This is such a wonderful love poem.... No doubt any man would be so proud that such as this was just for him. You are a jewel....and no doubt, your lucky husband would agree.......... Very nicely done.... Jim Troy

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 03 June 2011

THIS IS A POEM I WROTE FOR MY HUSBAND, IF YOU LIKE IT, HE MIGHT AS WELL LIKE IT TOO. (if he reads it when he gets home soon.)

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Bernadette Inocencio 26 March 2011

felt so delighted with this one! ! ! ! great one....! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 March 2011

This is for sure. Everything happens in the context of His love. He carved this world and us... He loves us so much!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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