The Words Not Spoken Poem by Queeny Gona

The Words Not Spoken

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Patience is the first learnt habbit from you
But short temperness is through heridity.
Your desire to contribute your level best to the needy;
taught me offering helping hand to the needy.
Your stubborn nature:
Led to introspect.
Your comparisions, hurted me many times
but led to have fellowship with GOD.
Your guidence:
paved the path for destiny!
Though we are far apart you are always in my heart;
Blinking eyes, threatening looks, frightening teeth!
very sweet to have them.
These are the words i feel like sharing with you:
But silence takes over it when we are together.
My heart cannot weigh them any longer,
Hence i present my heart to you on the eve of your B'day!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

My heart cannot weigh them any longer! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 18 March 2016

These are the words i feel like sharing with you: But silence takes over it when we are together. My heart cannot weigh them any longer, Hence i present my heart to you on the eve of your B'day! It is nice to empty your heart at an opportune time! It will definitely make the other happy! A very thoughtful gift on one's birthday whom you love and whose life has influenced you in many ways!

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Kewayne Wadley 16 June 2015

Nicely done. I love the amount of heart you shown. Especially giving one of the best gifts you can give on ones birthday! Lol :) . If anything great piece overall! There are a few spelling mistakes but granted great job!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2009

Who is that sweet-bitter friend Queeny. Good one. But check on some small errors.

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