The Wish For A Sleepless Night Poem by lady grace

The Wish For A Sleepless Night

Rating: 5.0


i wish for a rain
it erases the trace of mourning
i wish for a silence
bury the marks of sorrow..

i wish for a thunder
it hides the noisy crowd
i wish for waves
they make a pleasant sound..

i wish for a candle
undemanding as it melts
i wish a dark night
it makes me sleep..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 10 September 2009

Naizz my friend this is a wonderful piece..it has a sense of healing to it...it a very well penned poem...keep up the great work

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Nikunj Sharma 10 September 2009

A candle undemanding as it melts.....thunder hiding crowds.....rain washing away sorrows...u have used very nice imagery thru simple words...I like the poem...

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Surya . 10 September 2009

sure.rightful demand.naizz poem.enjoyed reading it. a 10+++ from me surya

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 September 2009

All the wishes of Lady Grace are legitimate ones to be granted with God's grace.

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Carl Harris 10 September 2009

This is a beautiful and tenderly expressed poem, Lady Grace, and your words in it are deeply touching. Carl.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 August 2010

‘I wish for a candle undemanding as it melts’ ~ Wow! Great philosophy in it…no getting only giving…. Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2009

wish for a candle undemanding as it melts i wish a dark night it makes me sleep.. every subsance has got its own merits/demerits. it suggests one is meant for each other and love is to die for others.. you can hide but despite that you wish so many things..i wish all drams could come true....beautiful write....10 read mineall dreams cometrue.. what do i seek..

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

Hmmm sleepless Good write drink milk and you will feel sleepy nice write

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Anand Madhukar 13 September 2009

A poem amazing in its simplicity and serenity.

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