The Wise House Poem by Olugbenga Ayoola.O

I agree the pen is mightier than sword and ideas can be beneficial or dangerous.I gave a ten for great thought.If you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU.Thank you.

Wise thoughts well written.....keep writing Bob

i loved it was kinda in a weird way cool to me haha.....sorry if i sound stupid lol =]

very creative i liked it!

I stood in the middle of the poetry, We move forward to the wise house Where all soul of the bard laid heads Under the precious stone of the wisdom Where million of head obtain knowledge And their pen is mightier than sword Their paper is stronger than stone Under the feet of the creatures A place where winds of knowledge blow And the light of wisdom shines I shall put my pen on the stone of nations O my paper shall white than snow Mr Ayoola.... I have read this poem. And I think I got the message therein. YOu write poetry, I must say. The flow, the picture it paints, are all clear. However, I think a few things are rather unclear to me. From the first line, do you mean I stood in the middle of the POEM? See my reworked version below. I stood in the middle of the poem as we moved to the house of wisdom where the souls of the bards laid their heads under the precious stone of wisdom where a million heads obtain wisdom whose pens are mightier than the sword whose papers are stronger than stone......... at this point i am not very clear about the rest. May be I'll read it again some other time and then reach you again. Uchenna Franklin

POETS, sit with the KINGS & QUEENS at table. POETS, make the world spin round.

I really enjoy your work and will use this one at a recital for a relative. I am looking forward to reviewing your entire collection!

nice piece, captivating, thanks for sharing