The Web Of Time Poem by Heather Burns

The Web Of Time

Rating: 4.5


In the rustling of the leaves
someone called my name

a voice so familiar
same old haunting refrain

hearing you on that Autumn day
My mind seemed to float away

to another time and place
visions of your handsome face

feelings just won't go away
keeps returning day by day

Caught up in the web of time
ever returning in my rhymes

if I could take tomorrow
trade it for today

I'd wrap my arms around you
never let you walk away.



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Tuesday, December 10, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 10 December 2013

wow, it is really wonderful, i like especially '' if i could take tomorrow / trade it for today '' love the poem..10+++

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Jimmy Levi 10 December 2013

I really like it, but the line skips interrupt the flow of the poem. Otherwise it's awesome!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

if I could take tomorrow trade it for today Repeated many times one can reach the past and reach the dear ones whom we miss. Beautifully rendered.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

if I could take tomorrow trade it for today Repeated many times one can reach the past and reach the dear ones whom we miss. Beautifully rendered.

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Unwritten Soul 11 December 2013

I can feel your emotion when your words curling my breath..nice one Heather_Soul

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Joseph Anderson 01 January 2014

This would make a beautiful song. A classy poem of endearing love. Brief and splendid

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Yasmin Khan 18 December 2013

Lovely thoughts beautifully woven in symbols of Nature

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Sallam Yassin 14 December 2013

very touchy and very romantic with sense of season |

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Susy Evelyne 13 December 2013

The romance tinged with regret gives this poem the atmosphere of a scene from a classic film. This is such a feminine poem - thank you for sharing it.

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Valsa George 13 December 2013

You hear your name whispered by someone dear in the rustle of leaves and the rush of wind! Not to let him flee away, you wrap your hands around! What romantic fancy! ! Enjoyed!

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