The Water Poem by Damian Dauthdaert

The Water



As the cold depths of frigid water drag one down
You must fight and resist the urge to drown
As wordless bubbles stream from your mouth
It seems like your luck is quickly turning south 
Death is near better pray for a miracle
As you see those bubbles float up that are oh so spherical
Fighting for life you struggle to swim
The life force inside you begins to grow dim
Life is preserved for another day
However in the end Death makes everyone pay
The eternal struggle has begun to pass
However opposite forces have begun to amass

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The poem describes the never-ending battle of life and death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Lees 03 July 2012

i like it its good maybe add a little more, but if you want thats all my little two cents that i want to put in

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