Hebert Logerie

Bronze Star - 2,227 Points (Haiti)

The Untold Story - Poem by Hebert Logerie

You once told me your race
(Not if I really cared)
You once showed me the true color of your face
(Not if that mattered)
You are whom you want to be
You are the sheep, you are the bee.

You once told me who you were
Once you discovered what the dean did
You called the police supervisor
And filed a report, there you hid
Your true genealogy
You wanted to be conveniently
Different than the jerk
Because there was no perk
For you to win
What an egregious sin
What a sad hypocrite
You are the pit
The pit bull that lies
And the other one, the cat
That steals the pies
You are no different than the bat
Who behaved like a wise crow
At day time and at night time
Chased the house mouse like a deadly owl
I never knew you’d stoop so low
By perjuring yourself; you duly committed a crime
By lying; you are just like the scarecrow
The kleptomaniac, which filed the death certificate
To claim the benefits that no longer fit.

You once told me your race
(Not if I really cared)
I just wanted the black ace
(Because that truly mattered)
The white pearl, the black gold
The white gold and my story told.


Comments about The Untold Story by Hebert Logerie

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (8/23/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    Simple and nice poem with good rhyme.
    Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 658 Points Ramesh T A (8/20/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    It is really an untold story jam packed with so many things! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tom Golding (8/19/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    Great rhyme scheme and story teling without being forceful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Core (8/18/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    that was good i as well like the rhyme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (8/14/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    the rhyming rhythm is the poem is superb
    last lines are the feast of the poem.
    regards
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*Nezra*~ Farrell (8/12/2009 4:25:00 PM)

    I favor your rhyme scheme in this poem its witty and loevly. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 31, 2011


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