The Ultimate Mix Poem by Amir Foroughi
The Ultimate Mix
Rage from a distant
The name unfamiliar
In the nights of old I always wished
In the longest year that had me down
These wounds kill time
My struggle sublime
Sold are the eyes I have
And cold is the wait for nothing
In dark I write my name in a long line
How is it possible for you to try?
Loving mother
He has come
To take your son
I'm swimming in the smoke
Of bridges I have burned
So don't apologize
And you're sure you've hurt in a way
That no one will ever know
But someday the weight of the world
Will give you strength to go.
This is not the end
This is not the beginning
Just a voice like a riot
Rocking every revision
But you listen to the tone
And the violent rhythm
The blame is mine alone
For bridges I have burned
So don't apologize
I'm losing what I don't deserve
What I don't deserve.
And so at last he came to me
With the echoing sound of eternity
Life is eternal
Birth is back to him
Back to begin
Back to earth
People laughed cried were silent
But he beheld me
Now it's the time
For sublime to go to him
Metamorphosis
Is the end to begin....
Sounds like the ultimate. very well written, great images Swimming in the smoke of the bridges burned. The metamorphosis. Poetry at a very high level, Amir.
Very well written my friend, I can see you put a lot of time and effort into this one! Favorites!
wow..see, we all have nice works to share with others. this is one of them. nice poem my mate. keep the good work up!
Excellent figurative language... I liked it... Carry On with More poems... :)
hmmm... very intriguing i'm mind boggled.. thanx for sharing (:
deep poem... with interesting philosophical thoughts... This is not the end This is not the beginning... wonderful line, very true.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 11:00:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
There is no success with no gaining after learning, there is no learning without meet difficulties and there is no difficulties if there is no life. There is no life if we not believing...To believe we must remember all what we have and what things were created for us...Body and soul, Both of them will open your eyes and mind to witness a thing call life, and every life will face difficulties, the level of challenge how to survive before meet victory, we need to pass the obstacle test and we will gain something, and knows how to cope with something like past..and learning many things make success come very fast....if we give up then we stuck between life and success...dont worry we can regenerate life by a metamorphosis...like caterpillar to butterfly we can change bad past to best brand new life...so come on, rise for victory! a great write Amir! _Unwritten Soul