the intense eyes reveal the hidden appetite,
the lips so seductive to have a bit of pie,
with the passion u see thru me makes me go wild
the luks so killing even the serial of killers wud die,
the touch so sensational tht send shivers to my body,
the way u say u love me is so breath taking tht cud
take my life but even thn i won't complain,
All this i need baby.......Go On n say u love me
n i say to the world tht i belong to u and u belong to me.
Siza dear, very old theme and thought.for thousand years lovers are saying this.give a new definition to love.but still i like it.
This certainly was a seductive piece. I'm not sure that it was as complete and total an expression as I have read in other places but it was very good. Well worth a recommendation. GW62
...words are here emitting truth.... a 10 has been clicked
so much love in between the lines... reads good. congrats, shiza
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is the ultimate desire, nothing old, rather universal appeal. Enjoyed this composition.