The Tulips Poem by Savita Tyagi

The Tulips

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That was the year I planted tulip bulbs.
After a year of eager and patient waiting
The gorgeous red and yellow flowers
Of mellow beauty filled in the garden.

I watched every morning in quiet admiration,
The dew drops and bees circling on soft petals.
The young tulips in mischievous breeze made,
Flower bed sizzle with life, vibrant and aerial.

As morning rays spread to light up the sky
From tall glass windows of my living room
Their exquisite brilliance and soothing aura
of beauteous harmony entered into my being.

But I didn't know much about tulips then.
Soon I came to realize that each stem
Bore just one flower, and their delicate
Flashy bloom lasted only for a week most.

I felt chagrined and cheated for my labor.
A sadness prevailed as the flowers wilted
And the single stem soon started to limp.
This was my first intimate tending of gardening.

Nothing much I could do but to miss the tulips
And endure the hurt of their short span of life.
As spring advanced into summer, the long
Herbaceous plants also withered to ground.

To see flowerbeds devoid of green was a blow.
The intricate planning of nature felt erroneous.
The showy life and the quick decay, that the
Tulips exhibited was new to my experience.

Or should I say that for the first time I was
Touched so deeply by the natural ending of
plant life. Like the devastating loss of my mother,
The saddest encounter- I took long to recover.

But nature is still kind and benevolent.
It takes our loved ones never to return again
But blesses us again with family and friends.
Tulips too bloom every year again and again.

They give me a week of their life filled with
Amorous beauty and post a cruel message
Wrapped in quiet tenderness to accept
Mother Nature's workings at her behest.

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amar Agarwala 18 July 2016

As always... Savita, your poems are so full of - subtle beauty and rich meaning.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2016

A Wonderful poem with Tulips blooming and drooping. I am very poor in gardening but i love the flowers blooming Here Tulips are blooming with fresh fragrance and in lovely colors. Loved reading each lines.

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Savita Tyagi 01 August 2016

Thank you so much Geetha for your lovely comments. So happy to see you back. Welcome again to the fellowship of poetry and its pleasures.

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Valsa George 29 July 2016

Indeed A lovely poem.... I can so well relate to this..... I too have had the same feelings of disappointments with my orchid blooms... they stay longer any way. But after a season of exquisite blooming, we have to wait for another long period to see them blooming again! However you have ended the poem in a cheerful note! A sure 10

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Akhtar Jawad 27 July 2016

A marvelous example of nice observation, poetic thoughts, and an artistic conversion in a lovely poem.

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Savita Tyagi 27 July 2016

Thank you so much Akhtar Ji. A comment from you is so precious and valuable. Thank you for reading the poem.

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Bharati Nayak 18 July 2016

A poem on life and death- -Like tulip, very vibrant, full of life- - -Life always exists- - It makes its appearance again and again.Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Savita Tyagi 19 July 2016

Thank you Bharti for your appreciative comment. Value it very much.

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Daniel Brick 18 July 2016

What a VOLTA - that's Italian for the sudden change of meaning or attitude in the middle of a sonnet, and your VOLTA in stanzas 4-5 is as devastating as any I've encountered because you had created an image of beauty that struck me as eternal, not consciously but unconsciously, and so I felt your lament in the poem's second half in comp; eter sync with your emotions. You bravely console us with the new bloom the following spring, but the shock of the volta, of the loss can't be completely dispelled.

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Savita Tyagi 19 July 2016

Thank you so much Daniel for your wonderful comment. I learned a new word today. VOLA is what describes best the experience of these emotions and situations. Reading your comment last two paragraphs seem unnecessary now. Thank you again.

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