Barbed Wire


The Truth About Human Evolution


It is right before our eyes
An ape is still an ape
An apple makes a great pie
Always did always will
The ape belongs to God like we do
But he ain't fooled like you

Submitted: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,958 Points Ken E Hall (8/17/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    You put a smile on my face, wouldn't it be awful if apes evolved from man using mobile phones! ...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Danny Draper (8/11/2013 5:50:00 AM)

    An interesting write expressing well a diversity of beliefs. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,923 Points Patricia Grantham (8/10/2013 7:07:00 AM)

    Whoopi! Bob. This is really a good one. This says a whole lot about humans they
    can act just like animals sometimes. We can learn some things from them.
    Even a dog loves his owner no matter what he does. Still licks his hands. A good laugh
    but so true. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,120 Points Diane Hine (8/9/2013 10:41:00 PM)

    So the ape has more common sense than we do, or at least some of us.
    I expect you're right but it's a shame we can't test the theory.
    Humour is a good way to deliver a sermon! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/9/2013 7:34:00 AM)

    I think, if a human tries to make fools out of other humans, he or she truly make a fool out of her or himself.
    we are here for greater goals. we are all selected by God.
    well done, nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 516 Points Juan Olivarez (8/7/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    Damned straight Bobby. Great poem. And great to have you back. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 7:11:00 AM)

    A great poem... Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,653 Points Dave Walker (8/6/2013 4:48:00 PM)

    A great poem, yes we as humans can be fooled quite easy. (Report) Reply

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