The Trouble With Love Poem by Ben Partenay

The Trouble With Love

Rating: 5.0


It goes like this
She offers her hand
You take it, she
Pulls back, says
“It’s not that cold”

She offers her eye
You catch it, she
Takes it back, says
“Keep your eye on the road”

She offers her heart
You take it, she
Lets you hold her, says
“I’m dying”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mare Dylan 26 February 2008

Yeah isn't that how that goes.

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Sandra Fowler 05 January 2007

Very appealing poem. Warm regards for a very creative January. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Ivan Donn Carswell 05 January 2007

It is a little death - significant but not fatal. Lovely poem.

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