The Tornado... Poem by Vikrant Jog

The Tornado...

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In the outer mess,
Subrogated insight,
Winds of emotions,
Flow up,
And go,
The smell of memories,
Still stay,
But certain winds,
Torment within,
And around,
They never change,
They never go,
Subsequently,
Learning begins,
To live with,
Or without,
Tame and forces,
Still vary to look,
Within,
Somehow,
Without...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 31 May 2013

Very nice, you have a vivid image and clear idea..good! keep it up ok_soul

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Valsa George 14 June 2013

Tornados sweep unexpectedly within and without! We have to learn to face them, though to still them may not be that easy! But cling on to some strong pillar, so that we won't be swept away! A powerful write! Thanks for the invitation! !

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Payal Parande 05 June 2013

very nice............love it

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Nader Baheri 04 June 2013

fabulous.i like it.our memories are like a tornado.stirring our thoughts.better live in the moment.~nb

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Hazel Durham 02 June 2013

Powerful write that says so much about our tornado of emotions, the question is to live with our tangled web or without! ! Inspired write! !

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Vijay Sai R 01 June 2013

nice words depicting the tornado

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