The Toddler At The Festival Hall Poem by Richard George

The Toddler At The Festival Hall

Rating: 4.5


He paddles in the spotlight-sun
of first memory:

tables are his friends
and the decking floor.

All he does in this charmed time
opens as a petal

when past, present and future
are three of his aunts smiling

and waves of jazz roll
across the beach of the Foyer Bar:

the Heaven Armstrong and Ellington glimpsed
at the end of their lives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Shepherd 08 June 2005

Captures the magic which one can just remember or fill in...I'm not myself sure whether the last stanza is too 'commenty' - would a reversion to the toddler round it off better?

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Richard George

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Cheltenham, U.K.
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