The Threehundredth Milestone Of The Poetry Gravel Road Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Threehundredth Milestone Of The Poetry Gravel Road

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I am tired but I like to continue.
My posture is feeble
but I want to finish the journey
walking up to the dead end?
I must thank the poemhunter website and all my fellowship
who gave a space to this tiny animal to walk along the road
without any obstacles.
I feel like a newly wed among my cyber colleagues
and I was surprised how in one's day collected so many friends?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
gone gone 03 July 2006

Nimal, as you tread with grace upon this gravclly path each of your footfalls brings forth sparkling gems.... tales of joys and tears..... and warm and hearfelt love and compassion for your fellow beings......thankyou. Love, D.. Thank you

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Sandra Fowler 01 July 2006

Congratulations! Wishing you strength for the journey, my brave friend. Warm regards., Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 30 June 2006

Brian is right Nimal, no dead end, a new beginning, see the solution beyond the problem Love Duncan X

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Brian Dorn 30 June 2006

Nimal, that's not a dead end it's just some road construction ahead... keep writing and congratulations on number 300! ! Brian

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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