The Thousands Poem by Jimi Doyle

The Thousands

Rating: 4.3


1000 arenas
1000 flaws
1000 yellow steps

the thousands

deft-footed ones
sidewise wonders

the moon tonight
slashing a ray of light
upon the window slats
through to the walls
as moontide arrows

thunder slack moon
is now hiding
now showing
against odd
almost false
purple clouds

the thousands
1000 sirens
1000 charities
1000 vapors
the moon tonight
razoring through
1000 false clouds
finding itself
against the window
slats and walls

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheyeanne Miller 03 January 2008

i agree 100%. by the way how are you doing these days?

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Sue Ann Simar 12 February 2007

1000 eyes. I'm watching you to see what you make next out of our little alphabet

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Christina Diaz 04 August 2006

one word: wow! thats deep...1000 cheers

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Anong All 19 June 2005

The imagery of your poem is very different.

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