The Thoroughbred Poem by Cathe Ferguson

The Thoroughbred

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Skittery, jittery, nervous? Impeccably!
The Thoroughbred's nose to the gate.
Intensity, density, anxious? Delectably!
Its fidgety pose will not wait.

The air fills with sounds
that the race track rebounds
and the draft sends a waft to the tail.
A hump in its back, a shine to its tack,
the sun grooms its flanks as they flail.

Bouncy, jouncy, anticipation
the atmosphere swells with the tension.
Bolty, jolty, taut thew's elation
will come when the gun vows contention.

The track lures the hooves,
the bay's heart approves
as its soul pays a toll to the biding.
Its teeth chew the bit, its head throws a fit,
and its wild eye glares at the chiding.

Rackety, crackety, ready? Indubitably!
The gate is flung open; they're off!
Tactfully, actually, the breeding's instinctively
apt for the victorious boff.

(May 26,1990)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

This poem really employs the sounds of the words effectively making it really fun to read.

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you for the compliment, Mary! It's greatly appreciated.

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