The Thing Most Guys Hate To Hear From Their Crush Poem by Julius Victorio

The Thing Most Guys Hate To Hear From Their Crush

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I always saw something different about her
Always saw that she was the one
The one that I needed in my life
And so I give a note to her
And I talk with her
About the way I feel
Towards her
I try my best not to say too much
I try my best not to go over-board
And this is because
I don't want to scare her
I don't want her to be my obsession
Rather than my love
And I don't want this to end

When we talked about it
It was blank
She didn't know what to say
I didn't know what to say
It was a freeze
I thought I had gotten somewhere
But this was only stage two
And the final stage was coming
When we could prove
If there is... love...

She told me she'd send me a message
Saying how she felt towards me
And my anxiety was consuming me
Until a couple of days later
Monday afternoon
She sends me a message

'I've only seen you as a friend
And like a brother
But never have I ever
Considered you to be my lover'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 01 July 2009

owwww, what a hurtful ending..just smileeeeeeee..naizz

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Made mother pearl, hole proof, Quick to catch light when sun buried, Moonlike reflects hidden light..... beautiful write. u must take words as holiar thanholy verses.....10

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Mikayla Carpenter 19 June 2009

This is yes, very sad. Its sad to think that alot of people do fall in love with friends and their friend doesn't return those feeling. Very nicely written, : ]

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