The Tattered Tallit Poem by Linda Hepner

The Tattered Tallit

Rating: 4.8


Your mind has gone a-journeying,
Your heart follows.
I stood here with my arms upraised,
V for Victory,
Holding above us worlds and years,
Our woven canopy.
It shielded us from blinding light,
The sun, the storms.
The moon.
Each day you took it in your arms
And closed your eyes and kissed its fringe
And spoke Shema, oh God.
But now you've gone a-journeying
And when you left, a fringe
Caught in the door and tore,
And I am bereft a-standing here,
Unravelling.
That canopy's my heart,
The white and blue tallit
That now is rent, fraying,
Unreparable.
The sun dries up my thoughts,
The rain falls through and
Flows down my face,
Unbearable.
My arms are low now,
Like my heart.
Alone I hold it still...
Although it will not float
Or save me in the flood.
At most it is a sinking hope,
A tattered flag.

LRH
In memoriam
1.20.05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 20 January 2006

I understand where you are coming from with this tuneful poem Linda, but I don't believe in destroying my now or future, by despairing of the past. The love will never stop, but nor shall I. I will always seek a brighter future and try and understand the reasons why. Otherwise, I may as well give up and die, and that would never do, would it. I enjoyed the flow of this mournful little poem, but the ending was rather abrupt. Just a thought. Like love affairs I suppose? Smiling at you with 9 from Tai

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Poetry Hound 20 January 2006

I agree with Jeremiah - sad and musical. Also unusual, which is nice.

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Jeremiah Shine 20 January 2006

sad and musical, Linda. sad

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