The Sword Poem by Marilyn Shepperson

The Sword

Rating: 4.8


There was this plain, straight sword
In a glass case with others of its' ilk
But what made this one stand out
Were the many nicks along its' blade
Among the rest of the swords on display
Some had jewel encrusted, fancy hilts
Most had etchings along the blades
Yet it was still this one unadorned weapon
That drew and relentlessly held my gaze
Those imperfections down each side
That no smithy had been able to grind out
Showed to this day, the battles it had fought
Of men it had slain before their time
Or at least hideously maimed
A deadly tale, silently told

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 23 February 2007

Like this, the structure is souund and paints a picture of a story of underdog recognition well done

0 0 Reply
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 05 September 2014

Swords the weapons of destruction of humans in wars and the poetry here on sword is beautiful.

0 0 Reply
Kelly Allen Vinal 23 February 2007

Wonderful painting with words, Marilyn! Perfectly executed!

0 0 Reply
David Taylor 23 February 2007

Dear Marilyn, The Poem like the sword is a cut above the rest. Enjoyed it, thank you. Love David

0 0 Reply
alice sunderland 23 February 2007

a real beauty to read marilyn. al xx

0 0 Reply
Danny Reynolds 23 February 2007

Marilyn, fear not. I spoke with the curator and he assures me it was a poet's sword, (Those nicks were merely notches, and very few were earned?) Danny

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success