The Swing (Tanka) Poem by ray Schreiber

The Swing (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


an old two by six
hanging from two rusted chains
relic of the past
this oak and metal mobile
in a long forgotten woods

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 26 April 2011

It's amazing how certain old relics have a way of bringinh emotional attachment. A beautiful nostalgic piece. Thanks. 10

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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