The Swelling Poem by Marieta Maglas

The Swelling

Rating: 5.0


And if my long kiss could burn your lips,
Then you would allow the lack of words
To be jammed between us,
As a swelling,
By forming a ghostly wall,
Which would get higher
Step by step
And day by day
Until it reaches the sky,
And certainly the Heaven,
Where The Lord would understand them.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven,kiss,lips
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

To be united unto Him is a lifelong insult on partings...... divine.....

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Ivan Kodorkovski 20 November 2009

truly sweet and poetic. thanks for sharing 10

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Dierks Emerick 18 November 2009

nice poem i like it very much 10

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Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

Up into the sky, Up into the Heaven, In which, Only God can understand us. 10

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Nolan Trenton 16 November 2009

This is a very well crafted poem, with excellent prose throughout 10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 01 October 2009

ghostly wall between us.....lovely metaphors in this poem.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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