Hazel Durham


The Sweetest Sound - Poem by Hazel Durham

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No sound was sweeter than you singing the song 'Mandy, '
Caressing, embracing tones,
In perfect pitch, we never felt alone,
Stable jockey with blond hair, blue eyes,
Fun was always your character,
Kissed by the beaming sun.



Driving us back to the Heath House,
Where our mobile homes stood proudly,
With darkened sky,
Car headlights shining on the glistening, rain soaked, country roads,
We chatted, laughing at the sheer joy of the life we sowed,
Just four co-workers, friends, young and free,
Passing by tall trees, branches reaching out crookedly,
Ready to touch our souls.



Stars twinkling showing the way to different galaxies,
Were in orbit, on a spinning top,
Then you start singing our anthem, 'Mandy, '
In soothing, mellow tones, going so deep,
Moving us to feel in our hearts, to weep.



Life was a show stopping caberet,
Woven with riding thoroughbred horses,
Highly strung, finely tuned,
Feeling their power beneath us, muscles contracting,
Striding out like elastic stretching,
Galloping around the Heath on its clay surface,
We relished the fast pace,
At one with beautiful animals of amazing structure,
Ready to race.



We shone with health but we had no wealth,
The drive back was a concert,
With you the star attraction,
A solo performance outstanding,
Sending us rocketing to a moon landing,
Freedom was finding living on the edge untamed,
Living was our taste of fame,
In our galaxy of four glowing stars.



The future turned out to be, not so kind to us,
But those moments now captured in words,
Of our pleasure of hearing the sweetest sound,
Along many miles with such wide smiles,
The moon bowing in respect to our friendship intact,
With our extreme wealth of happiness,
For a short time, before the fall,
I treasure such precious memories,
For the eternal light inside us all.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In memory of my two young friends taken in their prime.
Beautiful memories of such happiness and the sweetest sound!

Comments about The Sweetest Sound by Hazel Durham

  • Veteran Poet - 1,502 Points Elena Sandu (5/30/2013 4:41:00 PM)

    I love those unique moments when everything will connect rightly, that feel of happy being to come out as a life memory. Grateful for such a beautiful share, thank you! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 634 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/30/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    I live close to Newmarket and your chapter relating to horses reminded me of the thoroughbreds there.Great! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 531 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/2/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    It's a nostalgic composition to relive some treasured moments, some lines are really timeless:
    ' We relished the fast pace, ' appreciable in all respects (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,011 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (4/27/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    great write hazel... a beautiful tribute to your friends...... also nice lines and i really appreciate it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Poet Of The River (4/25/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    some sweet, some sour, a balanced poem. it could even be turned into a country song. it has a sort of compatible story line. your style is very different from mine. i always appreciate reading different views and styles. keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vikrant Jog (4/21/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Truth flows.... I really appreciate this work (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,613 Points Sayeed Abubakar (4/18/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Very good write. But can you think once whether you can change your style? A new poem demands to be different from the old ones. I know, you have that strength. Go on (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,271 Points Paul Brookes (4/17/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful graceful lines filled with bitter sweet memories, great write. BB: O) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,241 Points Valerie Dohren (4/17/2013 1:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful tribute to your friends Hazel, some lovely and inspired lines. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,155 Points Xelam Kan (4/17/2013 2:35:00 AM)

    story of the sweet past
    with full colors and contrast
    bring heavenly hue
    in yours idyllic view
    that made our hearts
    serene, loving and composed........
    Hazel...another grt composition from the past memories.
    sweet lines with great country music....... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,360 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (4/16/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    Eternal light of d soul oh my yor freeverse wording is exquisite here. I so enjoyd yor superb muse here. I hope u like mine too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (4/16/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Good experience well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013


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