Jojoba Mansell


The Sunshine Within - Poem by Jojoba Mansell

On bleak days, with leaden skies,
when you don't know where to begin.
Your head hurts and your heart cries,
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Comments about The Sunshine Within by Jojoba Mansell

  • Gold Star - 35,951 Points Chinedu Dike (6/5/2015 3:51:00 PM)

    Powerful and inspiration piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with lovely rhyme scheme. If ones faith cannot endure, one cannot endure. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 24,048 Points Kelly Kurt (3/26/2015 1:38:00 AM)

    Hope and perseverance. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Marketa Richnavska (4/17/2014 4:17:00 AM)

    stunningly beautiful, thank you for such a poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Karen Gonzalez-videla (3/27/2014 5:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece of art! ! ! I fell in love with the message you portrayed here :) If you have a chance, check my poems and comment on them :)

    Karen :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,332 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/26/2014 10:58:00 PM)

    Thanks for sharing this poem; just appropriate for today with leaden skies and water logged roads...congrats on being poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 738 Points Stephen W (3/26/2014 8:50:00 PM)

    Very fine indeed. Nice rhyme and rhythm, combined with clarity of expression. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,206 Points * Sunprincess * (3/26/2014 1:48:00 PM)

    ~After dark dreams of panic and fear,
    when you almost break, almost give in.
    All hope smashed, dreams far from here,
    look for the sunshine within.~
    .......this is the best advice anyone has ever given...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,010 Points Valerie Dohren (3/26/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    Excellent write, expressing a great philosophy of hope. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,567 Points Savita Tyagi (3/26/2013 9:50:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. We need to stay in touch with our sunshine within. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,574 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/26/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    You have the sunshine within. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,102 Points Leslie Philibert (3/26/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    Like the message, good write (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/26/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    A positive and hope filled poem which eloquently demonstrates that we are the only ones who can turn our grey skies to blue. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (3/26/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Well done! x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (3/26/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Well done! x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (3/26/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Well done! x (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 643 Points Ruth Walters (3/27/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    I love this poem. I've been feeling anxious of late and it made me feel better about things. You have a gift. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (3/27/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    A message of hope flows through this wonderful poem, in other words don't give up.
    We've all had hard times and bad days, but we get through it eventually.
    Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (3/26/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    A great poem, and even so the message it conveys!
    Should you read mine Memento, I'd appreciate a review.
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie pagode Kim (3/26/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    A wunderful poem... thank you for the message! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nims-sunshine Princess (3/26/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    Nice poem... ^^ with a positive msg_ there is always a sunshine within..no matter how much is rainy surround (Report) Reply










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