The Sunset Poem by Bette Kayley Jones

The Sunset

Rating: 4.3


The sunset glistens upon the land,
with people standing hand in hand,
the beauty that it brings to them,
the magic that it sings to them.

The sunset shines upon the ground,
with people standing, staring, astound,
the colors soaking into them,
the art evoking heart in them.

The sunset of life and love,
the sunset soaring in the heavens like a dove,
the sunset fills us up with mystery,
the sunset with an irreplaceable history.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ninja Soul 14 February 2012

This poem is okay...It's not the best though....But keep writing.

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Rose Jones 11 May 2012

Valese, something went VERY wrong

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Nims-sunshine Princess 26 March 2012

Nice way to explain the sunset light....~

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Rose Jones 03 March 2012

oh, you murderer. you were so sane when you were in third grade. something went wrong. very wrong.

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Ric Bastasa 16 February 2012

have a nice view of the sunset... sit a while facing it, savor the change of colors, and feel what fades within you and without you

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Rudeyard Kipling 15 February 2012

It is ok....but a word to the wise...if you want to write about a sunset....you have to really work to find things that have not been said or compare it to a person or event in a spectacular way. ....after saying all that you could improve some of mine if you like.... :)

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