The Sun In Sky Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Sun In Sky

Rating: 5.0


The world is fast asleep
Under the cover of darkness to keep
Control over kingdom and enlarge
Its influence on parts called very large

Soon the bird's chirp may start
Melody may appear from somewhere as musical art
Darkness may soon get in readiness to depart
Light may appear and play a crucial part

No way for darkness to remain for long
As sun may emerge from east very strong
For cool breeze and dews to disappear
It may soon show its head from hill's rear

'Oh, God take us from darkness to light'
Keep us free from wrong and insist on right'
With such resolve, man kind may emerge
From long cool pause to move and surge ahead

What a source of natural energy?
We can bury the dark and burn its effigy
It is our duty to perform best
Then coolly retire in night for rest

In between enough of thrust is to be made
Not to look at sky but toil hard with spade
Break the hard cord of land to make it smooth
Present day work to make it easy for the youth

Sun may remain in sky
You can reap the gain with lots of try
There is worth and possible result
The entire fabric is resolutely built

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

The world is fast asleep Under the cover of darkness to keep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Kar A Ghoun Khan Eloquent and filled with symbolism. Happy to read it. In my humble opinion it will take more than natural energy to step out of the dark and dwell in the light without any further need to retire.3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Some Girl A lovely write reminding us of the sun's place in the sky :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

If only we could make things better for the youth Edward Wilkes23 minutes ago Bravo Comment 1 Comment+1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

I like how your poem feels like a bedtime prayer. Positive and inspiring! Each day is a chance for a new beginning. +1 Great Job!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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