The Source Poem by David DeSantis
The Source
What is it
that gives life?
This eternal source
To make this mind,
make it think?
This eternal source
Who are we,
in these endeavors?
This eternal source.
And why do I not
think when I should?
This eternal source.
What is love,
and what are attachments?
This eternal source.
Who has beauty
and how do I fit?
This eternal source.
Is family all,
and where is my journey?
This eternal source.
All I know:
In all
there is love
in love there is health
in health there
is freedom
These are eternal sources.
Copyright (c)David DeSantis
If you find the eternal source, let me know...in the meantime...here's to eternity...Coach
Great piece bro.....very well composed and delivered with perfection as always.. Best wishes...*10* Jon
Everything comes to one...The law of cause and effect that is in science...the eternal source in religious belief is He...the Almighty One! ! ! As always greatly penned! ! ! Cate
good health....vigor....more freedom...mind is clear and free...eternal source is mind and soul...easily reach to God..above and beyond...
a soul stirring poem, a quest for eternal source...thought provoking
A thought beyond the Sources of Food, cloth and shelter An intellectual thought. Finally ends with essential realisation That very source of Love, Health and Freedom. Enjoyed reading the eternal sense in this poem. Thank you, dear poet.
A poem insearch of source... very good one. I can see a different Desantis in these lines..*10*
Meaningful lines, all those significant metaphors from eternal source, wonderful vision, great insight, a very good work
Hey my friend and how are you? Good read and the source is right. I have a couple for you to review when you have time: One Again Reality Blessings, Loyd
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I like this David, it reminded me of the eternal source energy I gain through Tai Chi, since discovering it's powers, I have tapped into it on several occasions when the need was great and never have I been dissappointed. The wonder of the eternal source is that is is just that, eternal, never in short supply and love is it's greatest tap, which leads to both health and freedom from the ties that bind us. A most enjoyable read, very thought provoking, smiling at you, Tai